Which might be a slight improvement, except the "Say my name" line always makes me snigger. *"Say my name! No, really, say it. Say it. SAY MY NAME!"
Got an awesome review on my "Peace of Mind" story. Very short but to the point. "You take drugs don't you?" I just wish they'd left their email address. (This review is on AFF)
Yes, I'm in some serious need of professional help. I know