Darqstar (darqstar) wrote,
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This one is for indigoskynet (but you can read it too!)

This is something that arose from a conversation with Indigo, who agress with me that a lot of potentially awesome fanfiction writers sometimes ruin themselves by overnarating their characters, to the point where you want to throttle them.


As he rose from his chair, the gentle whisper of his silken trousers creeping across his smooth, hairless, skin, he slowly flexed his muscles, marveling how he, the human machine, could function so beautifully. I am a tribute to all of mankind. I am truly made in God's very image, he thought as he headed into the bathroom to take a wizz.


And that, kiddies is an example of "How to kill your own writing!"
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